I Wish December 15, 2005
Posted by Alex or Clifton (circle one) in Clifton, Clifton’s Love Poems, Clifton’s Poems.trackback
She’s gone;
Been blown away
Like a leaf in the breeze.
I wish I could hve told her
Before she left me
Forever.
I’m such an idiot.
I kept it all bottled up inside.
I should of let it out,
Should of let my emotions
flow out of my heart
like crystal clear water
going down a stream.
I wish I could bring her back.
I’d hold on to her
with all of my strength
So no matter what
I’d always be
with the one I love.
I wish.
Okay, I think I’ve been commenting on the wrong poems, and I don’t want this Alex person to think I’m frick’n crazy and think I’m a stalker or whatnot. Hopefully this is your poem Clifton, but if it isn’t, hello Alex. lolerz. So, this will be my last comment, just to be on the safe side.
Why are all your poems getting sadder? Like at first they were all, “This girl is amazing, yadda yadda” and now they’re all, “I lost her.” Why? Does the girl hate you now? I’ll go eat her if she does. Rawr. lol, just kidding.
This poem and no pictures like before, but that’s okay. It was a moving poem. It made me smile at the end. I don’t know if it was suppose to, but too bad. I wish… is a great strong ending. I wish, I wish…
I was a fish.
Okay, I’ll stop now.
hi!
OMG! i finally figured out how to leave a comment. It is sooo hard, right? lol. Your poems are totally amazing!! I know you won’t tell me who they are about, so i am not going to ask. So…We really need to practice our song. I don’t know if we are going to make it.
LOL
Love-
Liz
awesome.