http://alexandclifton.wordpress.com/2006/01/19/in-my-arms/ Welcome to the haven of Short stories, Long stories, Poems, Songs, Raps and other various form of literature! Sun, 24 Jun 2007 23:41:48 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 http://alexandclifton.wordpress.com/2006/01/19/in-my-arms/#comment-33 EmilyC Thu, 16 Mar 2006 00:49:11 +0000 http://alexandclifton.wordpress.com/2006/01/19/in-my-arms/#comment-33 i bet she has hazel eyes. cause you wouldn't know. what is her name! i bet she has hazel eyes. cause you wouldn’t know. what is her name!

]]> http://alexandclifton.wordpress.com/2006/01/19/in-my-arms/#comment-10 Emily M. (the cool one) Fri, 24 Feb 2006 01:14:01 +0000 http://alexandclifton.wordpress.com/2006/01/19/in-my-arms/#comment-10 Personally, I've never liked poems that arn't based on real life. I like writing them, but I don't like reading them. Or, what I mean is I'm pretty sure you've never been to Iraq, or gotten a hug. (lol, just kidding, just kidding.) But what really got me is that I don't understand the poem. I've read it 7 times to be exact and still don't understand. But I do like your word choice, in the way that is painted a picture until the second paragraph thing. Personally, I’ve never liked poems that arn’t based on real life. I like writing them, but I don’t like reading them. Or, what I mean is I’m pretty sure you’ve never been to Iraq, or gotten a hug. (lol, just kidding, just kidding.)
But what really got me is that I don’t understand the poem. I’ve read it 7 times to be exact and still don’t understand. But I do like your word choice, in the way that is painted a picture until the second paragraph thing.

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